[Draft] Imperial Ambit 1 Narrative Book - Free

A friend and I have been putting substantial effort into a project for the last year and I wanted to share a draft that I've put together over the last few months.  This is a work in progress narrative which follows an ongoing campaign between the Emerald Fists (my home brew chapter) and the Raven Guard.  It incorporates all of my existing fluff/background for the chaos Fists and details a war for a fallen Imperial system.  The book is about half done at the moment.  Please let me know what you think.  The file is a PDF and about 18mb so be patient as there are a lot of images.
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